SS Chapter 1 Page 28. See Transcript tab below.

Keira, internally: There it is again…

A feminine figure drags a barely conscious Keira deeper and deeper through the water

Keira, internally: That beautiful song.

But something feels…wrong.

Her face scrunches up ever so slightly in growing awareness.

Keira, internally: I can’t…

Sudden panic overwhelms the melody she hears as Keira becomes aware of water replacing air.

Keira, internally: I CAN’T BREATHE!

She struggles blindly, weakly, but is released without much effort. The being watches from a short distance as Keira floats in the current, helpless.

Keira, internally: I can’t…

A hand reaches out.

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Wouldn't this be a great place for a cliffhanger. 😉
– M.G.

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